I don't know anyone else on here who writes place like you do, Jaap. The places are like whole characters of their own in each of your stories. And I love the way you build a place out of so many particular and unexpected sensory details.
This whole piece feels like a broken, unstable radio transmission, the creaks and crackles of searching amidst years of piled-on scraps. It is large in its insistence on maintaining momentum.
„The woman in the lobby is folding napkins with a precision that frightens my internal chaos.” - had to pull this one out. This scratches my itch:) Thanks Jaap x
I don't know anyone else on here who writes place like you do, Jaap. The places are like whole characters of their own in each of your stories. And I love the way you build a place out of so many particular and unexpected sensory details.
Thank you for your kind words, Jessie. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Totally agree with Jessie. Top tier sensory architecture x
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This whole piece feels like a broken, unstable radio transmission, the creaks and crackles of searching amidst years of piled-on scraps. It is large in its insistence on maintaining momentum.
Thanks, Mahdi!
„The woman in the lobby is folding napkins with a precision that frightens my internal chaos.” - had to pull this one out. This scratches my itch:) Thanks Jaap x
May the winds become your friend, the sun shine on a calm sea, and the traghetto sail to Tunisia. This brought back memories...
Would love to hear, Jude.